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Friday, February 28, 2003
Razing Cane: I should have known that, through modern science, James Joyce and Carl Reiner could conceive-ably have a son, but it never really occurred to me until my friend Nick Sarames sent me the following tale. It is a true story of something that happened to him last night at Grand Central. I know it will not spoil it for you if I reveal that it is about what Nick, who is blind, experienced when a woman rammed into him, breaking his cane and causing his entire thumbnail to tear off. Nick's telling is truly artful in its digital analogies:

Once apon a time Under-my [Tom's brother] Thumb was walking threw Gram Central Station when he came apon a running woman. She was running, running, running, running... well you get the idea. While this author has no proof, he believes that while the woman was running, running, running, running, she was also thumbing through a magazine. All of a sudden, thummmmp! She fell, hand over foot, write into the blind man's cane, barely keeping her balance and probably fingering herself for blame. The man landed, thumb first, right in to the pillar. Just then the woman said: "you're bleeding." The man said: "You hit the nail off the thumb." His cane was also broken. He shouted: "Oh no! It's brocane." A cop asked what was broke and the man said: "You mean broken, officer. Broke is when you're out of money." The cop said: "You mean you're out of money." This embarrassing exchange went on for a few hours when finally, the man exchanged his cane for a bandage. Speaking of Band Aid, didn't that record suck? The man was thumbling for something to say when the cop said: "Let me give you a ride in my cart." The man said: "Don't put the cart before the horse." The cop said: "Don't nose your thumb at me, young man." The man was able to make it to the train. While on the train, he couldn't help singing his favorite Beatles song:

"Thumbthing in the way she moves, a tracks me like no elbow lover." When the man got off the train, he held out his thumb for a cab and said to the driver: "Hey, pull my finger." OK, that was uncalled for.


2:00 PM  |

Wednesday, February 26, 2003
Life of Brian: Received a brilliant observation from David Chelsea (to whom I am forever in debt for the caricature of me at left): "If Phil Spector is capable of murder, why should it be hard to believe that he'd produce a movie just to drive Brian Wilson insane?"
12:53 AM  |

Saturday, February 22, 2003
[2/26/03: The Radio Luxembourg link is now corrected—thanks, Roy!] Have Mersey: Thanks be to Nick Sarames for tipping me off to the incredible 1963 Radio Luxembourg aircheck (scroll down on that page and you'll find it) on ReelRadio.com. This Top 20 countdown is unusual by aircheck standards in that it's unedited, so the songs are intact. It's a fascinating snapshot of the British pop music world at a time when America had yet to discover the Beatles. My favorite moment is when Gerry Marsden, speaking by phone, says he doesn't think "How Do You Do It" would do well in America because America doesn't like "happy poppy music" the way England does.

Speaking of "How Do You Do It," it's interesting to hear that record in context with the other hits that were on the British charts at the time. I was struck by the use of jazzy piano as the lead instrument within a Merseybeat band. I know Fats Domino paved the way, but the Pacemakers' use of the piano is still impressive in that it's so different even from what was being done at the time. I'm sure Ben Folds must have done a double-take when he heard that record. (Not that the Pacemakers weren't bound by contemporary pop conventions; I nearly broke up when I heard the way the pianist [the Pacemakers' Les McGuire?] brought his solo to an abrupt halt as his eight bars came to a close.)

6:40 AM  |

Friday, February 21, 2003

Someone's Rocking My Dreamboat: Had two interesting dreams last night, both of them musical. In one, two of my favorite musicians, multi-instrumentalist Michael Lynch and drummer Brian King, had decided to form a band. (Those two have been connected in my mind for a while—see the "Separated at Birth" item in the Dawn Patrol archives.) They had recorded a power pop song together, which I heard in my dream. I remember thinking that it started out dull but had a glorious release in the B-section.

In the other dream, I had somehow been drafted into backing Eminem at a concert at a hotel—playing violin. This is funny because I have never played violin in my life. It was just the two of us onstage together, with a synthesized backing track. I remember being quite proud of myself because I figured out fairly quickly that, if I only bowed one string, I could estimate the space between the intervals on the violin neck, playing the notes with surprising accuracy. Occasionally, when I felt super-confident, I bowed two strings. And, yes, I was thinking, "If Deni Bonet could see me now!"
3:00 PM  |

Wednesday, February 19, 2003

Michael Lynch getting in touch with vintage rock

Going Underground: My friend Michael Lynch, whom Dawn Patrol regulars know as a highly talented singer/songwriter/multinstrumentalist (he composed the famous Gaits of Eden and Dawn Patrol jingles), did me a great favor a couple of years ago by demo-ing a song I wrote with Anderson Council in mind: the London Underground-inspired "Girl on the Northern Line." He did it exactly the way I requested: a Peter & Gordon feel (complete with a "World Without Love"-inspired bass line), with a jangly guitar line ripped (yolk and all) from the Nightcrawlers' "Little Black Egg." I'm putting it up here [click on the song's title to hear it] at the request of Perry, an ace singer and songwriter himself, who was able to hear beyond my out-of-practice fingers when I tried to play the song for him on guitar last night.

Although the Anderson Council never did record my song or perform it live, their singer, Peter Horvath, did record an excellent demo of it, which I would love to share with you. Unfortunately, I only have it on cassette tape and so can't record an mp3 of it. If any Dawn Patrol reader writes me to say they'd like to hear his version, I'll write Peter and ask him to send me a digital copy.
12:30 AM  |

Tuesday, February 18, 2003

Drift Away: I have been having a blast these past couple of days, both despite and because of the huge snowfall and its car-high drifts. Can't write now, as I'm heading with my sister, Jennifer, to see Lou Christie at the Bottom Line, but I'll try to put a few words in tomorrow night.
6:01 PM  |

Saturday, February 15, 2003
Something's Gotten Hold of My Rhyming Dictionary: I've decided that, while Peter & Gordon's "Woman" remains my favorite song today, Gene Pitney's "Something's Gotten Hold of My Heart," written by Roger Greenaway and Roger Cook (who also penned those Fortunes songs I love), has taken the edge for best lyric: "You touch me and my mind goes astray." It rhymes with the preceding line, which ends in "day," but somehow I think it stands on its own. Personally, I would love to be touched in a way that makes my mind go astray—in a good way, of course, not the way I feel when someone hogs the hand pole on the subway.
1:18 PM  |

Webb Slinging: It is 2:10 a.m. and I feel compelled to share Peter & Gordon's "Woman" with the world. For the moment, it is my favorite song, having just won the edge over Gene Pitney's "Something's Gotten Hold of My Heart" (which I might also be convinced to put up if someone requests it). If you're a Beatle fan, then you probably know that Paul McCartney wrote it under the name Bernard Webb, though you may not know that some pressings credit it to "A. Smith." (He was trying to prove that a song didn't need his name on it to be a hit—it could hit even if it were written by "A. Smith.")

I love this song [click on that "Woman" link if you haven't already] because it is so beautifully arranged [which you can tell even from this bandwidth-saving forced-mono mp3] and so unabashedly romantic. As I listen to it, I'm alternately identifying with its sentiments and wishing that someone else—someone in particular—would express them to me. It brings to mind the mixture of joy and pain that I associate with the first, uncertain stages of relationships, where the joy is made even more so by the overcoming of pain, and the pain would be unbearable were it not for the hope of joy.

Probably the feeling of hope that I have right now, which is almost completely unfounded, will be gone in a day or two and I will be back to listening to Fortunes songs like "Here It Comes Again" or, at best, "That Same Old Feeling." Probably too that Ivy League CD which has left my CD player for no more than two days in the past two years will go back into heavy rotation as I zone out on "Funny How Love Can Be" and "My World Fell Down." (If you're not familiar with those, you can hear a few reverb-drenched seconds of the former on Amazon.com.) Probably I will wake up this very morning (or afternoon, at this rate), and realize that I am as close to being in love as I am to being, as Dorothy Parker would put it, Marie of Romania. But, for this one moment before I go to bed, Gordon Waller is crooning "Woman" like he really means it, the cellos are reverberating through Abbey Road's cavernous Studio One, and I'm imagining that someone I care about could feel that way about me.
2:41 AM  |

Friday, February 14, 2003

That Old Black Magic: I was very happy to find in my e-mailbox today the first response to the excerpt from my grandfather's unpublished manuscript A Fool in Love.

Nick Sarames writes: "You know, after you accept the fact that sex and romance started before you were born, and after you can accept the fact that members of your family have done things that you would not otherwise find disgusting, you begin to realize that people before us have led interesting, and often exciting lives. In part because of that story, I am now convinced that every woman over 80 has a delightfully devious side to her."
1:46 PM  |

Wednesday, February 12, 2003


This Bud's for Me: Tonight, twenty-four hours after I was laughing with Nick and Perry, I cried my eyes out at my mother's and stepfather's house, as I perused a manuscript that I'd forgotten about for nearly 20 years: A Fool in Love, by "Bud."

"Bud" was my grandfather, Abraham I. "Bud" Levin, and A Fool in Love is the story of his courtship of my grandmother, Jessica. It's told mostly in poems, with occasional narrative snippets and one incredible fable, which I'll share with you in a moment.

My grandfather apparently kept a record of where they went and what they saw while on dates; the photo above shows Charles Boyer and Loretta Young in "Shanghai," which, according to A Fool in Love, my grandparents previewed at New York's Paramount Theater on their second movie date together—July 14, 1935. If you've read Delmore Schwartz, then you can imagine how affecting it is to read details like these about one's own grandparents; it's like the flip side to In Dreams Begin Responsibilities.

I have a lot that I could say about my grandfather's relationship with my grandmother, and I'll share some of it if someone reading this writes to say they'd like to know more. For now, I'll just say that he loved her deeply and passionately from the moment they met. As for her feelings, you can gauge them from the following tale, which is Episode 17 of A Fool in Love:


The terrible tale

of the little Girl

who loved to play

with matches !

Once there was a dear sweet little Girl,
Whom everybody loved.
And she went to school, and was so-o-o-o smart
And cheerful, and courteous and obliging
That everybody loved her even more.

And then she went to College, and became
Oh so-o-o-o sophisticated
And everybody tried to love her
Even more.

And when she left college, she worked oh-so-hard
And led a noble and worthy Life, with only one
Teenie-weenie single little vice —
She just couldn't help playing with matches.

At first she just set teenie-weenie little fires —
For the fun of it.
But more and more the terrible fascination grew
On her until she was setting bigger fires, then
Bon-fires and finally conflagrations and holocausts.

And finally she met a fine, noble etc. young man
And promised him she'd give up this awful vice
And "go straight" from then on.

But the fatal temptation was too much for her weakened
Will power. Eventually she lit a match again, and
Set fire to the Whole blamed structure, and burned it
Up.

And she had no compunctions about the damage she had caused,
But only felt sorry for herself because she held the match
Just a trifle too long, and slightly burned the tip of her
Dear little finger.

And everybody crowded about to console her — to kiss her
Dear little finger tip and tell her what a blooming shame
It was for such a thing to happen to such a dear, sweet
Little girl.

That is everyone — except the young man.

He was too super-everlastingly confoundedly "Burnt-up"
Himself!

7-23-35

— Bud


11:55 PM  |

All Things Nuts Pass: After Tuesday Night Trivia last night (which went very well, thank you), trivia player and friend o'mine Nick Sarames invited me to have a late dinner with him and his friend Perry Gartner at the Waterfront Ale House, a fine pub near the Kips Bay movie house. I had never hung out with the two of them together before, and so was not prepared for all the laughter. I can't remember what was so funny, except that the two of them, who have been friends since high school and share a natural rapport, just kept cracking me up. As anyone who knows me is aware, my whole body shakes when I laugh, and, in this case, I was doubled over, laughing to the point of a hacking cough, trying desperately not to spit out my potato-and-spinach soup.

The only funny thing that I can almost remember is something Nick said with regard to the dessert we shared, which was Nutty Waffle Cone ice cream (the Ben & Jerry's kind, I think). Nick commented that he wasn't crazy about the selection, as he didn't like nuts. I asked if he was allergic and he said no.

Perry said, "How can anyone not like nuts?"

Nick's answer was something like, "They're so annoying. You bite into one and you think it's a chocolate chip..."

The next sound anyone heard was me doubled over, dying, hack-hack-hack. What a wonderful way to end the evening.

While in the ale house, we heard a version of George Harrison's "What Is Life" which Nick, with his perfect pitch, perceived was three whole steps (musical notes) below the original one. We couldn't find out who did it, but, now that I'm home and can check the All Music Guide, I think it was Shawn Mullins. It's not really worth seeking out, though—nobody beats George.

Incidentally, Nick had an interesting take on a past Dawn Patrol topic, the Tanked Michael bracelet incident. Nick is a dedicated fan of Michael's heroine Ayn Rand and says her philosophy would not have condoned Michael's keeping the bracelet. I forget his exact explanation—it had to do with Michael's not having earned the value of the bracelet. I'll have to ask him to e-mail me the details so I can post them here. I like having ongoing philosophical dialogues on The Dawn Patrol.
2:28 AM  |

Saturday, February 8, 2003


Photo of Del Shannon in Japan, March 1987, courtesy of DelShannon.com.

The Truth About That Falsetto

Del Shannon died thirteen years ago today, by his own hand.

I remember it like it was yesterday. Since (thank God) I've yet to lose a close friend or member of my immediate family, February 8, 1990 remains the saddest day of my life.

What made me feel especially sad was the feeling that I could have helped him. I'd interviewed him nine months earlier for Goldmine, but was then so wrapped up in my own existential melodrama—compounded by being days away from college graduation, with no job lined up—that I was oblivious to signs of his depression. I know now that, realistically, there was little, if anything, that I could have done, being an outsider (and a reporter at that), but the thought of having been in any kind of a position to have helped Del weighed heavily on me for some time after his death.

My guilt was compounded by the memory of having sensed at the time that Del was not long for this world. Specifically, after the interview, I had a bizarre and completely irrational feeling that I would never see him again. It didn't make sense; he was only 49 years old (or so his publicity bio stated—it later came out that he was five years older), and seemed to be in excellent health. Yet, on the morning of the following February 8, when I heard WCBS-FM's Harry Harrison back-announcing "Runaway," saying, "Born Charles Westover in Coopersville, Michigan . . ." I froze. I knew he wasn't just giving the listener extra bits of trivia, as the CBS-FM DJs often do. Something terrible had happened.

Another of my regrets was not having written up my interview with Del before his death. It finally appeared in Goldmine in the spring of 1990. I wish I still had it on my computer so I could share it with you. Instead, I'll excerpt my liner notes to the CD This Is . . . Del Shannon, which includes quotes from the interview. These excerpts are from my own manuscript, so they're slightly different from the final edit:

When I met Del Shannon, nine months before his death, he had a childlike innocence unlike anyone I'd ever seen. It was backstage at an oldies show. While his contemporaries on the bill were all jaded to various degrees, Del's eyes sparkled brightly. When he took the stage, his whole body was infused with the youthful brio of one for whom rock was a genuine means of expression. In other words, he sure as heck wasn't just going through the motions.

Yes, Del was sensitive, but not just in the "sensitive artist" sense. He reached out to friends and strangers alike, taking a genuine interest in their well-being. But the flip side of sensitivity is vulnerability, something he knew only too well.

The feelings of loneliness and isolation in his songs were real. However, as he noted to me, he didn't compose them through a veil of tears. "When I wrote 'I Go To Pieces,' I was in a great place. I usually write when I'm in a great place. When I'm depressed, I don't usually write. So I take all of when I'm depressed and throw it into when I'm feeling good. Weird, I guess."

He was born Charles Westover on December 30, 1934 in Coopersville, Michigan. (Once he became a recording artist, he knocked five years off his age.) He began playing guitar while in his teens, honing his skills while stationed in the U.S. Army in Germany. Upon his return to Michigan, in 1959, he formed his first band, landing a residency at Battle Creek's Hi-Lo Club. One patron there claimed that he was going to be a famous wrestler—"Mark Shannon, the wrestler." Westover liked the surname and decided to use it himself. "Del" was a contraction of Coupe DeVille, a car he liked at the time.

Ann Arbor disc jockey Ollie McLaughlin liked Del's songs and produced demos of them, which he played for Big Top label owners Harry Balk and Irving Micahnik. The pair signed Del not only to their label, but also to their management and production companies. Although their hold on Del's career would ultimately prove limiting, his tenure with them brought forth his best-known songs. The tracks on this collection are all from that period, 1961-1965.

Del's first single would be the biggest hit of his career. He never made a secret of the true subject of "Runaway." "I ran away from myself. . . . I always want to run away from A to B, and then I get to B and I wanna go back to A. I think everybody wants to run away. That's why that song seems to live on."

Aided by Max Crook on Musitron (a prehistoric synthesizer), Del wrote the song at the Hi-Lo Club one night in 1960. Onstage. As they were playing with Shannon's band, Crook hit upon a chord progression that Shannon liked. He asked Crook to keep playing it, over and over, while he worked out a melody. "Got in trouble with the club's manager, too," he recalled, "who finally came up on the stage and told us we were nuts: 'Stop playing that! What are you doing?'"

A worldwide hit, "Runaway" topped the charts for a month in both America and England in the spring of '61, catapulting Del to stardom. He and Crook quickly composed a follow-up, "Hats Off to Larry," which went Top Ten on both sides of the Atlantic that summer.

During the next year and a half, Del had five singles, none of which made Billboard's Top 20, although "So Long Baby" did manage to make it up to #28. Then, in January 1963, "Little Town Flirt" brought him back into the public consciousness, peaking at #12. The song, like much of Del's material, was inspired by personal experience. His then-collaborator, Robert McKenzie, suggested the title, sparking Del's memory of a little town flirt he once knew.

. . . . While many of his contemporaries would eventually confine their recordings to remakes of their hits, Del was forever true to his muse. He always wrote from the heart, and he loved performing, whether for 1,000 or 10,000. He recalled to me, "Jeff Lynne said to me, years ago, 'Del, you seem to be lost a bit and you don't know which direction you're going in.' [But] the last time I worked with him, there was no doubt. We just sat down and we just did it. I'm not afraid to risk now at all. I don't have to follow, 'cause if it isn't successful, it's OK. It's successful to me."


12:55 AM  |

Friday, February 7, 2003
365 Dawns: If you'll look to the archive listing at the left of your screen, you'll notice that this week marks the one-year anniversary of The Dawn Patrol. I thought this might be a good time to look back and see what have been some of the pluses and minuses of the past year.

One big plus, which I'll mention right upfront because there's no minus to go with it, is that I still have wonderful friends, including new ones I've made over the years. If you're one of them, just the fact that you read this Weblog and want to keep up with me when we're apart means a lot to me.

Tanked Michael has observed that within my pristine Jewish-Christian exterior lies a foul-mouthed vixen who occasionally springs out to say something existential. He calls that side of me "Dusk." So I'll call the pluses "Dawns" and the minuses "Dusks":

Dawn: I'm better employed. At this time last year, I was scrambling for writing gigs and temp jobs to make up for the several days each week when I wasn't at the newspaper. Now, I'm getting more work at the newspaper (at least for the time being; there are no guarantees for freelancers), plus hosting Tuesday Night Trivia (now in its ninth month), working a regular part-time job as a medical biller, and still doing some freelance writing here and there. It's not easy, but it adds up to a living wage, with occasional money left over for sushi.

Dusk: I still long for a single, full-time, career position where I'm not always having to work at someone else's desk.

Dawn: I was in a serious, committed relationship for much of the past year, something to which I'd aspired for some time. . .
Dusk: . . .and which is now over.

Dawn: I'm attempting, in every aspect of my life—very much including The Dawn Patrol—to place less emphasis on what I do and more on who I am.
Dusk: In the immortal words of Petula Clark, "Who Am I"? [Don't miss that link—Ed.]

Dawn (who usually gets the last word):I don't know the answer to that question as well as I'd like. In fact, I find it impossible to answer without resorting to descriptions of what I do, or Christian talk about how I exist in relation to God. And, while I do believe what the Bible says about the latter, it doesn't give any kind of sense of my individual identity.

So, of course, I did a Google search on "who am I"—throwing "Chesterton" into the engine as well to make it more interesting?and found a great quotation from a G.K. Chesterton book so obscure that I've never heard of it: Basil Howe. The quotation (from an excellent page full of them ) doesn't answer the question, but it does give an idea of the conflict I experience (and I'd imagine others do too) between wanting to define myself by my own achievements versus wanting to define myself by my relationship to God.

It's easy for Chesterton to decry wit, because he possessed such a supreme wit that he could hold his own in public debates with George Bernard Shaw. But I like his point:

"The curse of our modern man of the worldism is that we court the women we disapprove and despise the women we respect: we talk of a good woman lightly, like an old household chattel, and forget that her price is above rubies. We are not lowest on our knees before the pure and tender woman, but before two eyes and half a dozen diamonds. I am sick of all this fin de siècle sniggering over wit and culture and the rest of it. Did wit bring us into the world? Did culture bear pain that we might live? Did they love us in our silly fractious childhood and have no thought on earth but us? Can they comfort us, or kindle or sustain? Do we go to an authoress when we are wretched, or think of a woman of fashion when we are tempted? No, indeed, . . . but a woman that feareth the Lord she shall be praised: give her the portion that is due to her, and let her works praise her in the gates!"


1:39 PM 

Tuesday, February 4, 2003

Two Tribes: An hour and a half ago, I was on the final few steps of a long walk from the Rodeo Bar [where I saw a band with Tanked Michael, Todd, and Scott Nybakken] to the 9th St. PATH platform. I could have gone to 23rd St., but I couldn't find a store that had the "low-fat" cookies I'd set my heart on, and then the 14th St. station looked too foreboding, filled as it was with skanky characters. As I walked down those 9th St. steps, dressed in a brand-new mini and top, a suede jacket, black tights and shoes, and a beret, I was preparing to congratulate myself on having escaped lecherous comments from all the strangers who'd passed me by...

But it was not to be. I had only about nine steps to go, when I spotted a man walking up the stairs who had a body language and, uh, searching gaze that I knew well from 20 years of walking around Manhattan. He might as well have been wearing a sign saying, "I Come From a Culture Where It's Perfectly Fine and in Fact Encouraged to Give Strange Women Reviews and Commentary About Their Body Parts." Sure enough, as he prepared to pass me, he took me in with a stare that I knew would precede something unwelcome.

"Nice thick legs," he started. I immediately wished him ill. I know I shouldn't care what a total stranger thinks of my physique, and never mind that to him it's a compliment, but I just hate comments like that. Especially when they're from a stranger who might well be drunk or drugged and decide to grab at those nice thick legs.

All this went through my head in a nanosecond and I was walking on past him as quickly as I could, when he continued, without a beat (and without a verb), "You like a Ha-seed-ic Jew."

By then, he was past me on the stairs, which is a good thing, because, after the two seconds that it took for his statement to sink in, I couldn't contain my laughter.
2:18 AM  |



 
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